Wednesday, October 14, 2009

George Washington Carver Field Trip

I went to the George Washington Carver monument in Diamond Missouri Kansas. We went on the bus to the field trip. show us how to do laundry when they had no electricity to wash it. They make soap with stuff to make it to wash
laundry at home. We went on a tour about George Washington Carver. We were grinding corn into corn bread to eat.All of us went to George Washington Carver monument at ten-a-clock the morning. I like the best of going on the tour about carver. When I go again I would go to the theater and watch the movie about George Carver. He wash his own laundry at home.

1 comment:

  1. That was a great place, wasn't it? Hopefully, we'll go again!

    1. Put a comma after "Diamond"
    2. take out the word "Kansas" after "Missouri" because we went to Diamond, Missouri---not Kansas
    3. Look at your third sentence and see what word you left out.
    4. On the last sentence, add "ed" to "wash."

    Great job! +10/10